i don't know if its the case or not but it sounded like you were reading these lyrics and rapping them. the type of effort needed for this type of record and its setting we need to feel the emotion of these lyrics you spitting. for example when you hear ace hood or meek mill rap, i feel their pain and emotions off what they spit. you need to work on your delivery, which will come over time and develop the more you spend time in the studio, etc. also your voice was monotone on this record - which in today's times is considered boring. nowadays rappers have a couple to a few flows in one verse or in the course of a whole song, keeping the listener more entertained. again, with more time and practice, hopefully you will find yourself and how to use your voice to get closer to this effort.
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hott
i don't know if its the case or not but it sounded like you were reading these lyrics and rapping them. the type of effort needed for this type of record and its setting we need to feel the emotion of these lyrics you spitting. for example when you hear ace hood or meek mill rap, i feel their pain and emotions off what they spit. you need to work on your delivery, which will come over time and develop the more you spend time in the studio, etc. also your voice was monotone on this record - which in today's times is considered boring. nowadays rappers have a couple to a few flows in one verse or in the course of a whole song, keeping the listener more entertained. again, with more time and practice, hopefully you will find yourself and how to use your voice to get closer to this effort.