as i stated in my "greatness" song comments, again your delivery needs to be worked on. i hear you "getting money" but i don't feel you "getting money"… by that i mean, i hear your lyrics but i don't feel them. i don't feel your emotions attached to the lyrics you spitting… which will come over time and develop the more you spend time in the studio, etc. also your voice was monotone on this record - which in today's times is considered boring. nowadays rappers have a couple to a few flows in one verse or in the course of a whole song, keeping the listener more entertained. again, with more time and practice, hopefully you will find yourself and how to use your voice to get closer to this effort. i think if you would've added a money machine counter sound effect on certain lyrics of the song would keep the listener more entertained and brought out some of your lyrics to life. i also thought the use of the term "homeboy" is played out. i haven't heard that term in years. i thought that the amount of time for this record at two verses was a good call. kept it short, sweet and too the point, a third verse would have been overkill.
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as i stated in my "greatness" song comments, again your delivery needs to be worked on. i hear you "getting money" but i don't feel you "getting money"… by that i mean, i hear your lyrics but i don't feel them. i don't feel your emotions attached to the lyrics you spitting… which will come over time and develop the more you spend time in the studio, etc. also your voice was monotone on this record - which in today's times is considered boring. nowadays rappers have a couple to a few flows in one verse or in the course of a whole song, keeping the listener more entertained. again, with more time and practice, hopefully you will find yourself and how to use your voice to get closer to this effort. i think if you would've added a money machine counter sound effect on certain lyrics of the song would keep the listener more entertained and brought out some of your lyrics to life. i also thought the use of the term "homeboy" is played out. i haven't heard that term in years. i thought that the amount of time for this record at two verses was a good call. kept it short, sweet and too the point, a third verse would have been overkill.